I like the hand. Posing is not even necessary... ;)
You might want to use more line width differentiation - your lines look flat and boring. I think studying anatomy and proportion would help a lot, as well; you give muscles and bones little or no definition. Work from life more often. I really liked your sketches of Liz; they looked much more graceful and anatomically accurate (not that I have anything against stylized anatomy, but it looks clumsy if the artist doesn't know realistic anatomy and proportion as well.) I would say the same about faces.
That's what *you* think...Nice drawing.
Also, sorry for not responding again on the first post about Audrey. Regarding the answer to your question, I just wanted to say, I'm impressed. I've always imagined that you use your mental abilities most efficiently if you do things you like or are interested in. But it's again amazing to see what your subconscious is able to do if you're subjected to a skilled 'tist and the scene just hits your favourite fetish.As for your drawing, I gotta agree with Anonymous (1) though. You seem to be an awesome hypnotist, but you should work on your drawing skills a little more ;)
I've just added a branch over at Fiction Branches that was dealing with a hypno post. I'm normally not much for freezing but this seemed like an appropriate place to put it in the story and post it on here! :Dhttp://transform.to/~zach/cgi-bin/fbstorypage.pl?page=091216200024J3st3r&path=nospamstoryIt's also my first attempted at writing in this genre so please let me know what you think
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